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Model: Jessica Wang

Downtown, Memphis

Check out the other shots from our shoot: Standing on the Edge of Summer II, Enraged Angel and JWang

Critiques


:iconphoenixflaym:
I'm not that good at critiquing photography, but I'll give it a shot.

I looked at the other ones, too. I like the pose in this one the best. This would make a great stock photo or something for people to reference; her pose is awesome.

I think the background could be a little more dynamic, or something that really makes the model stand out, unless there's some symbolic reason behind you choosing a background like this. It's just too plain. A color background might look really good; I'm thinking either orange or a butter yellow shade would do the trick.
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:iconbrittsperspective:
this ones my favorite
i love the intensity
everything is perfect.

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:iconbrittsperspective:
this ones my favorite
i love the intensity
everything is perfect.

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flickr:: [link]
myspace:: [link]
blog:: [link]
jpgmag: [link]
:iconpixelbalance:
Interesting pose and beautiful light! :)

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Camera Data

NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
1/60 second
F/4.5
50 mm
200
May 7, 2006, 5:07:24 PM

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