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Punk Love by =X-GloomCookie-X:iconX-GloomCookie-X:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Lyrical




Verse 1:
Can't really describe why this feelings so good,
I guess that I just fucked her cause I knew that I could.
She was so so pretty with her red red lips,
with hips so nice I just had to give them a kisssss...
Starting with kisses, smooches and hugs,
but turned into a powerful fuck, fuck, FUCK.
Everythings so nice when she touches me there,
but all I wanna do is fuck her everywhere.

::Guitar SOlo::

Verse 2:
Her momma don't like me and I think I know why,
it wasn't really icing she found on my pants that night.
She caught me with her daughter sneaking out of the house,
so she chased me with a knife to make me get out.
I think she's catching on to all of our lies,
but she needs to get over it so I can take her daughter and go get high,
when all I wanna do is give her a kiss
and fuck her really hard cause she's my bitch bitch BITCH.

Chorus: (slow and steady)
kisses......
fucking....
loving.....
cumming....
Pretty little punk girl I love so much...
Your the best thing a boy like me could evver... touche....

Pause, then guitar solo again..
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Author's Comments

This is inspired by the song "Anarchy in the UK" by the Sex Pistols and "Orgasm Addict" by Buzzcocks.... I was speaking from a males perspective, so ignore the horney idoit soundingness of all of this, I was just having some fun :) .. Leave your comments -Kia Lola

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:iconbittersweetdream:
~BitterSweetDream Apr 8, 2004, 3:33:13 AM
Uhm...

Interesting.

*blinks and covers innocent eyes*
:iconvinegar-the-imposter:
~Vinegar-the-Imposter Apr 8, 2004, 3:59:58 AM
the verses work well, but two guitar solos in one song? is oen going to be really short? see, i'm not sure whether your average person has the attention span to sit through two guitar solos in a song.

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:iconisisdeacon:
~IsisDeacon Apr 8, 2004, 6:18:13 AM
this would make a kick ass song with the right music :clap:
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~Lil2Saturn Apr 8, 2004, 7:45:33 AM
Cool. :clap:

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=X-GloomCookie-X Apr 8, 2004, 1:29:05 PM
first one kidna long and the second one short, just a closing few measures.. The song in general is short, but it's pretty neat :) -kia

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so pull on your hair, pull on your pout, cut the
conversation, just open your mouth. Pull on your
face, pull on your feet and let's hit opening time
down on fascination street --The Cure
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~Vampness Apr 8, 2004, 3:42:45 PM
haha... that's funny. I like it.
"Starting with kisses, smooches and hugs,
but turned into a powerful fuck, fuck, FUCK."
My fav word! yay! lol Heyyy, I'll make music for you with my guitar! It'll be the best song ever!!! :D lol ooooo, I think I'm hyper. Well anyways, cool song :)

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~pyro-punk Apr 8, 2004, 3:45:52 PM
fuck i love this!!!!! this is like me,lol !!!!!!!!! i'm not too perverted < looks around>. hehe. i liek this, i can totally see joey ramone or johnny rotten singing dis. i like it a lot, keep it up!

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~Vinegar-the-Imposter Apr 8, 2004, 3:52:17 PM
ah okay :) sounds cool! i'd like to hear it one of these days.

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~horologii Apr 8, 2004, 3:55:03 PM
Definitely Sex Pistols-ish. I think this would make a great song. Good job.
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