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Model:Lauren B.

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:iconbear48:
I have a learning disability and I do not write much because it is so hard and time consuming for me. I am telling you this because I want you to understand how strongly I feel about your work.

You seem to be a very good story teller.

That is something I value greatly in a photographer,

You use color well and you seem to speak for/ with your subjects in you work.

I like the layering of surfaces and textures I often see in your work. It is a subtle but strong thing through out.

You are a fine Photographer who seem to have a strong grasp of your craft.

I give you very high marks
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:iconwitchesandnightfears:
Reminds me of the movie "The Colour Purple"

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Been waiting for you so long, little bird of prey.
To fly me higher to the brighter day.
Where the lizard lingers long under the sun.
Forgetting that night, darkest July Paris '71.
But you can't turn back the time, It always waits in line.
:iconmelodiousmelody:
Beautiful model, dress, and photo. :D

The only thing I would say is that be careful of overexposed places in the background. In this particular photo, it looks pretty nice, but it can be distracting. :)
:iconandrearn5278:
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:iconrav777:
Beautiful, love the way you did this. :heart:

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:iconshadowart-ist:
love the contrast between her outfit and her surroundings :)

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:iconlazereth:
First I want to say its a nice idea and concept in this shot. The main thing that really detracts my mind from this shot is the fact that model looks like she is bored and about to fall asleep. There are some solid color usage in the shot but the editing style really doesnt do it for me. I feel like there should be more contrast added to the picture to make it pop more. I think the natural light is quite nice in the shot but would have probably make it pop more with the model if you used a fill flash off camera left on the model to really make her stand out from the caboose. Putting the model in a white dress against the red of the caboose was a good idea and could really work. But I feel like its just lacking in either saturation or something. Maybe try adding some fill flash or a good reflector to add more light on your model to and play with your color saturation a bit. This a great shot in its own right just not something that would really draw my attention if I was looking a dozen thumbs.

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:iconholly6669666:
i love this :) it seems so dreamy the expression, or in deep thought about something. and the location fits well

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I like it

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
1/160 second
F/4.5
18 mm
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Apr 29, 2006, 3:54:20 PM

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