From childhood's hour, I have not seen
as others saw, the golden hours.
As others saw, I could not dream
of glory so wonderful, of glory's power.
My passions from the common spring.
My passions from the common dream.
My passions arrisen at midnight's fall,
as the sun comes up and the blue birds call.
My sarrows, love, I could not awaken
as mother earth slept, left unshaken.
The beauty I saw, so blatantly plain,
that my breath stole away in feeble waves.
From lemon yellow sun, to her loving sister moon,
I have not seen as others saw.
From the red fog mountain, to his blue brother water,
as others saw, I could not dream.
And of the glory, suculent and sweet,
I believe in magick and that it seeds..
because for the first time, dear,
the hand draws near the golden hours...
and my heart again feels love.
















Comments
I don't understand much about poetry but somehow I feel so related to your poem! It's like you managed to put a bunch of thoughts I had flying around here in my mind, into one solid pice that anyone can read and enjoy!
This means it's a fav!^__^
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I love it... I mean... it's almost as though... you read it out of a book or something... i mean... IT IS REALLY... REALLY great.
I love it.
Lemon yellow sun... i like that.
Love always,
×Kat
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We make up for so much time a little too late.
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"I believe in magick and that it seeds..
because for the first time, dear,
the hand draws near the golden hours...
and my heart again "
awesome job
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this is a beautiful poem, perfectly portrayed your feelings, i believe.
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I htink that this is a beautiful poem, YOu write beautifully.
And I will comment on your stuff anytime
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